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图画作文题目读三遍否则不动笔审题三事项a.英文指令b,图画信息+图标信息c文字说明如何避免跑题:图画图表与文字说明相结合,确定主题。题目未明确时间写成一般现在时没有太大问题难写可能是错的不写写自己会写的内容第一步是用两至三分钟审题,第二步想两三个功能句就可以开始动笔去写了,不建议把整篇作文全部都想好再动笔写。因为你全部都想好再动笔写可能写着是前面想的东西都忘了,以两句或者三句为一个单位就行。思路首段:描述图画/图表中间段:描述寓意implication寓意;内涵尾段:评论/建议+展望Directions:Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which youshould1)describe the set of drawings.interpret their meaning.and 2)point out theirimplications in our life.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2(20points)(温室花朵03)温室花朵经不起风雨首段图画描述:环境+人/物+动作+文字(1)介词短语表环境(2)there be引出人/物(3wing表伴随状态(4)with+n.+ving/ved/.介词短语表身上或周围的事物(⑤)although引导让步状语表反差(6)被动+定从:文字说明These are two simple but enlightening drawings.(可省略chart图表drawing/pictures/cartoonsenlightening=though-provoking=meaningfulInside a huge warm house,there is a little and delicate flower.growing vigorously andblossoming.with the house protecting it from the outside severe weather.delicate精致的(易碎的)图画描述:环境+人物+动作+文字丨介词短语表环境(1)inside-=inthere be引出人/物(2)vigor n.力量vigorous vigorouslyving表伴随状态(3)growing vigorously and blossomingwith+n.+ving/ved/介词短语表身上或周围的事物(4)Although it seems quite healthy and strong in the house,this plant withers quickly after it isput in the rain,with its petals falling in the wind前面提到a house后面the表特指although引导让步状语表反差(5)put put put withers=dies=becomes dead petals=leavesAlthough it appears healthy and strong inside the house.this plant withers quickly whenexposed to the rain,with its petals falling quickly in the wind.Finally,several Chinese characters can be noticed,which say that flowers in thegreenhouse cannot stand the wind and rain.which say that+句子which+短语被动+定从:文字说明(6)several=some=certainbear/tolerate/endure忍受第二段Nowadays不能用副词修饰名词The contemporary Chinese families are characterized by "one family,one child",and such ascene above can be associated with a host of parents and their kinds in reality.contemporary当代的联系到=-linked/related/connected to in the real life=in realityAdmittedly.an increasing number of parents,now.prepare almost everything for theirchildren,such as foods,clothes,houses,tuition,marriage and even future jobs.a growing number of=an increasing number of=more and moreadmittedly诚然food不加s事物总称加了表种类这种现象非常值得关注。值得关注的原因也可以直接提前写出来。如果没有原因,写前半句图片中抽象可写具体如果是个体可写群体This phenomenon is particularly worth concerning for the reason that parents pay excessiveattention to youngster's comfort and enjoyment.ignoring the significance of independencefor the youngwoth有价值for the reason that=becausefathers and mothers=parentspay excessive过度的attention to=focus only on ignoring=neglectingIt is parents'overprotection that causes young people to build up inadequate competence orconfidence to face the societytoo much love=overprotectionnot to build up adequate=to build up adequate build up=develop既可以直接对动词不定式进行否定。也可以对后面的某一个形容词或者名词进行否定,反正只要有一个否定它就对。第三段However,independence.to my understanding,can be likened to a joumey leading to
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